A very rough version of my A3 images panel for my preferences. I need to photoshop in the site in the render of my esquisse, and also manipulate the other project below so that it runs across the bottom of the page.
I'm using a barcode type element to present the esquisse, as a reference to Moneo's approach, is this working?
Should include anything else? I thought about including a render of the other project (the one I showed you), however I don't want to clutter the page. What do you think?
Thanks for the help
Blake
Hi Blake,
ReplyDeletejust a few quick comments:
1. the esquisse is getting much better, some real modeling in the facade (I especially like the openings to the sky) and positive moves internally.
2. the elevation doesn't match the 3d view ... the part that is underground is revealed in the 3d model ...
3. the colour of the stone in the esquisse is overpowering. i'd tone it back a bit.
4. you also need to add more subtlety to the earth tones in the earlier project.
5. the barcode layout is working well i think ... there is enough here to see what you can do, and it shows commitment to an idea, with confidence.
6. your plan is great ... i'd replace the Moneo images above (which you aren't supposed to include anyway) with a close up of the plan.
Cheers, a few things to do, but definitely going in the right direction. good luck.